All Comments on 'My Swap with Mom Ch. 01'

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parrot454parrot454about 1 year ago

Nice start of a series. Can't wait for another one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
Normal boy?

He's 19 and in HS? Crying because he's being teased, at 19? How does that qualify as normal? And don't even get me started on the poor writing and laughable premise...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please Continue !

Been_That_Done_ThereBeen_That_Done_Thereabout 1 year ago

Please write in your native language at least until you learn English.

rjr_1954rjr_1954about 1 year ago

Interesting concept! I think it's a very good starter story & great writing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

HDblackheartHDblackheartabout 1 year ago

Not bad needs some editing still and to short I'd like a little more wind up to get to know the characters

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