by Jay Dee
The appealing thing with this story is, it's at the same time dreamlike and realistic; it has hypnotic power in itself; it feels like an impressionistic picture; its erotic content being far from explicit, seems to be flowing in imperceptibly, maintaining and spreading a dense presence, where practically anything gets erotic, so I must say: quite a masterpiece!!!
Good story and, even better, the writing is mostly grammatically correct. Many of these stories--even some of the better ones--badly need editing.