All Comments on 'My Villain Arc'

by Forger69

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Semen production volume changes only slightly for a man between orgasms, regardless of excitement level, or frequency of getting off. The idea of a 'massive cum deposit' is just pure bullshit. Also, you seem to be VERY confused about the internal anatomy of females.

Forger69Forger69almost 2 years agoAuthor

greetings sir/madam anonymous, this is my very first time jotting down a slice of my fantasy in writing. Now reading it over multiple time there are many grammatical error here, and yes there is no biological accuracy either. To be honest I have mashed up my favorite troupe scenarios into my own self insert story. like how convenient for my shaky plot that the lady had the door left open at nighttime when she is all alone. I wrote this short story as a creative writing, I am sorry that you were not able to find enjoyment via my story.

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