by WendyTrilby
Wonderfully written and very instructive on how to make sex scenes sexy! 5* for sure!
A great story, very erotic and well told.
I learnt a new word: "Puckernut", new but totally suitable.
Yes you should certainly keep writing!!
(from a southern hemisphere reader)
A first for me as a reader here. 3rd person to first, back to third and then first again. Very bold. But in this story very appropriate as the act of sex is very personal and thoughtful, the setups aren't. Well done.
Great story, I would give it 5 starts for the ending alone, but the whole thing is terrific.
It was a very good didn't expect that ending of the second deflowering till she entered the bathroom. But was a great touch good job on writing enjoyed a bunch. 2 thumbs up as they once said now it stars the writer the star CONGRATS.
The pace was great. Only 2 grammatical errors, that is nicely unusual for porn stories. I REALLY enjoyed that the story was told from the woman point of view (for the most part) and the gentle way the actual sex was described. Way to go Wendy.!
Enjoyed it. I enjoy your writing style and how you describe what they are feeling during the sex.
You paint vivid pictures that generally flow smoothly, and arouse me wonderfully.
Wonderful material.
At age 18 and being high school graduates these four want to try out their sexual equipment before heading off to college. The thing is, once you've tried it, you're hooked for life. Really enjoyed this story from beginning to end.