All Comments on 'My Voyage of Submission Ch. 15'

Enjoying the story.- my only comment is for a high level secret, Beth's and Miranda's status to Greenbriar is shared too often! Need to know is breached to often!

It is like picking up a novel that you can not put down.

"I would have a harder time giving up everything else I own rather than give up Beth"

I think this sentence says the opposite of what you wanted.

7 to 10 days between each chapter is to long !

I think in this world the Press and Police are pretty inept. As I'm sure in the real world they would have all been outed by now. Not to mention the bad guys having probably figured it out and are ruthlessly planning revenge. Joshua already mentioned that his business practices were being anticipated so I'm sure the BDSM community chat lines around the world have been burning up with news of the "Good Ship Humps Alot" adventures.

I was surprised that Joshua never even acknowledges Beth's sacrifice to free Yasmine? It would be cool to see him takes his wrath out on that club for forcing Beth to risk herself.

Great chapter

Cheers

Hehe, I needed to laugh so hard! "lèche-moi le vagin". I thought to correct you, because a 'vagin' could not possibly have the masculin form. But it has, and now I even laugh harder. I salute you and your research.

Getting wilder and, surely, danger all round, both physical and reputation Al.

Well researched as usual and perfectly presented. Another five star episode.