All Comments on 'My Voyage of Submission Ch. 16'

Exceedingly sublime story! Such a wonderful read. I'm on the tip of my chair, really. If the story were to be performed in a theatre, it would earn a standing ovation.

Good god.....you pulled out all the stops on this chapter.....pushed every button I have and I loved it all. I know I'm infatuated with the character Beth but when she was attacked I just quit reading. It took about a hour before I could go back and finish. A couple of broken arms is the least that piece of crap deserves and hopefully in the future he falls down a flight of stairs. It looks like Joshua is going to have to reevaluate everything as they have made alot of enemies and their getting close.

Keep up the great work.

Cheers

Excellent and sitting on the edge of my seat type chapter.

Wow! What an action packed chapter, brilliant and utterly enthralling.

A very easy 5 stars too.

Tess (uk)

What armored car supplier these days would fail to put run-flat tires on one of their cars?

Who forgot to have run flat tyres? Completely unrealistic.

It had run flat tires. Wasn’t running because of damage to limo running through road blockade damage to axle.

At least Joshua and co didn't cut and run but they are certainly courting disaster. One question, how did the perps know to set up an ambush, is there a traitorv in mJoshua's entourage?

An easy 5 ⛤

Wow! Great action. More, more, more.