All Comments on 'My Journey of Discovery Ch. 02'

This story is off to an excellent start.

At fair as first 2 chapters go for catching my attention and making me want to read it all, this story has surpassed all erotica that I have ever read with only one exception, WBDP. WBDP was finally beaten by a slim margin in later chapters by aToS. This has a better start than aToS.

Here's hoping that you show your talent and write this story even better than the 2 aforementioned stories.

I can't wait to see where our little slaves life goes.

So many places to explore.

I really enjoyed the first whipping with the riding crop where she has incredible orgasms culminating with the blow on her clit. Beginning to wonder if she will ever make it out of Florida to the interview in New York.

Brilliant addition! Very sensual, not as much of a culture shock as I thought it might be.

Tess(UK)

The 1st chapter quickly got my attention and had me wanting to read where this journey lead Beth. It became obvious that Mistress L would have her wanting more.

I am enjoy your writing skill and this story.

Going strong. Excellent writing drawing out her experiences so far. 5 ⛤

Strong writing that builds on the first chapter. She is a believable character with an interesting personality and drive to learn the submissive lifestyle. Looking forward to reading more