by Writer6324
I’ll have to get the queen of spades tattooed on my tit so all the black men can see and know I’m there for their use
You could use an editor. Hiram switched to Nathan halfway through. If you want one, I could help you out.
Otherwise great story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Will their master take kindly to them playing without him? I also would have loved to have seen more involvement with Clive. Would have been hot with him being more active earlier and I would have loved seeing the family and our protagonists start turning him into a cocksucking cuckold for BBC.