All Comments on 'My Wife is a Daddy's Girl Pt. 08'

WOWWWWW Em and her Dad with 2 college girls this is extreme. I can't wait to read future chapters in this fantastic series. Keep Em and her Dad Cumming Chad

Author, are you going to let the character Chad be a cuckold until the end of your novel? please change that, the plot with his revenge would be much better for the development of the romance, so make him fuck his niece and then his sister for cheating on him with his own wife, you must take revenge on his wife by divorcing and creating a plot by screwing him her life and that of her father after where he spreads the video of the relationship, please don't let him be a cuckold until the end of the story, if you are going to do this please let me know in the comments because I won't continue reading this if I haven't chad's revenge

Pronouns, for the love of all that is good, please use pronouns. It is so frustrating to have the extreme hotness of this story constantly spoiled by reading the same name eight times per paragraph! I'd have gotten an F for this in fifth grade.

Also, what's with using the other person's name in every other line of a one-on-one conversation? Who talks like that?!

Pleas let this guy get revenge.

endless verbal diarrhea from a bad author, with no real plot, no ability to construct natural reading dialogue, or a single likable character. END IT ALREADY.

I need part 9 to be longer pl

This feels like filler. The movie sections could be much shorter and the story paced faster. We know em and her dad fucked. We want to know what is Chad going to do about it.

Yeah, this is going nowhere, slowly. Good luck.

I want revenge though. It’ll be satisfying for the entire world to know these assholes debauchery