All Comments on 'My Wife Was Humiliated at a Party'

That was kind of scary but still tantalizing in a sexual way. Obviously with friends like those you’re never going to be free of them again.

I never do pain on purpose but your story wasn’t about me 😜

My mind wondered if this couple had been in any close to this before the party,

I did like the story. I wish more people who read on literotica would rate and above all comment.

I’m looking forward to reading more from you.

This read like a school essay, keep trying.

Wonderful start!! Would love to see where this goes!!

I'd like to see a follow-up.

-jog

If there is a kitchen in this house, there was plenty this cuck could have done. I don't think these guys were so desperate to fuck his wife they were willing to be stabbed to death.

pretty monotone in tone. Its like your reading from a Dictionary. no Passion. You are telling us what happened like in a newspaper not SHOWING us what is happening. A Creative writting class would be advised. The point of erotica is to arouse people with your story. This story is just flat... unimaginative. Your premis is pretty good, I had high hopes for your story and the ending... didnt even feel like an ending... you just stopped... good luck on your next endeavor

To those who commented on my writing style...you're correct. And I could have done better.

No defence but i got this idea and blasted it off in a hurry.

I have and idea for continuation but not sure i want to now..

I do have others in the pipeline and hope they are better

Oh, although many of my stories are based on or actually factual this is fiction...he was constrained by big men and stopped from taking action

Are these stories being written from Experience

or desires of wanting to happen or do to men

i bought the cock cage an ak47 enough amo and mags 2 extra propane tankes and fast acting glue

I enjoyed your story, thanks for writing it. I did look forward to each event being more developed, hearing about their inner feelings and thoughts or the details of what they were experiencing while being taken or used. But a good story. Thanks