All Comments on 'My Wife's Tale Ch. 02'

However, sucking another man to completion, spitting it out or not, seems like cheating to me. Pretty well told story, though.

He must balance the scales

1*

The cheating started with the emotional cheating. Getting close talking about sex is where it went to cheating. The kissing, feeling sucking and all that is definitely divorce. The emotional part might be enough for me to leave but some might think that's extreme. Also finding out many years later would make it worse for me and same as hubby the fact that people knew and talked about it would piss me off even more. He should bring the guy home one night and say look I bumped into an old friend just to torcher her before you divorce her

life.

. . . but the writing is so terrible, it's hard to read. Forgive me for saying this, as I appreciate the efforts of all the authors on this site, but you must consider getting an editor to smooth your atrocious writing. I'll still read the next installment, simply out of curiosity. Thanks.

I hate to discourage but start reading novels by good writers or classic authors, let that sink in. If you then feel capable, you still need to get an editor who will probably have an impossible task on their hands but the final product will be better than this.

You can find out about volunteer (free) editorial assistance here http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=9

illiterate cuck shit.

Only for pervert cuckolds or brain sick ones!!!

who isn't. Why in the heck do you need somebody else to sexually demonstrate on your wife what you should be doing; then explain to you how to do it so you can go home and experiment? Are as inept in bed as you are at writing? The cucks must love theses stories of yours, while the BTB's want your man card back. Me? I just want the series to end none of your characters is worth a damn.

The fact that your two offerings end with no god seque I'm sorry to get be it a 3 star rating. If it has a emotional, dynamic, and creative ending I could jump to a 5.

Thanks for sharing your efforts.

All options are still open...What really happened, how will he react, how will she react...so 2* for now

ya got a 3 so far. lets see where this goes

And YES, You should turn in your "Man Card"

Whatta' CUCK

Weak

Added nothing to the first chapter. Continue...

Still no rating

This did not.

Glad you didn't rush to tell everything in the first paragraph of the first chapter. A little story, a little sex... More chapters please1

WTF are you still reading?

Why? To piss off your skanky ass, that's why. 1* - to piss you off further

Come on CH. 3 please, or as many as is needed to finish the story.

another cocksucking WIMP posting dumb cuck SHIT.

Cuck finds out he is married to a whorewife and is excited.