All Comments on 'Nadia Pt. 08: Nadia got beaten'

Oh man! You're spelling is terrible and your phrase cobstruction is even worst. It seems a six year old boy is telling us the tale.

Please, for the sake of the readers, go find help.

Some mistakes are acceptable, but not these.

You have a good idea here. The plot is interesting, but you're wasting a good opportunity to make a memorable story.

PLEASE, put your story through Grammarly or ChatGPT to fix the grammar. You have an interesting story and we're enjoying it, but the grammar has been getting worse with each chapter. A lot of users have pointed this out now so please consider it.

The plot started realy good with this stories, but recently this is at best a draft :-(

I realy liked what you had going - please reconsider and rework, this has so much potential

terrible english .... all the verbs in present tense, he never uses the s for third person singular. Even if you are not from an english speaking country (like myself), at least elementary grammar rules should be observed ...

People in comments could also put the story through these sites mentioned if they want to read it abit more clearly