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With the two on top of me, Carolyn begins bouncing up and top with me along for the ride. I try to steady my hand so I can better lick my sister. Trying to do so makes me that I might've not been helping Carolyn do her cunnilingus part when I was fucking her, may have just been distracting her. Hopefully it was a good distraction though, just like the distracting she's doing on my dick.
I wish I could tell you what was going on, but I only had eyes on my sister's crotch. I think Nancy and Sarah were looking at each other, maybe even snuck in a few kisses from across for all you who want more Sapphic stuff in here, but that's just an I think.
Anyway her vagina feels really good going up and down on my pole, no surprises there. Even my haphazard attempts to orally pleasure my sister from this angle seem to get some traction. However, it is soon to be over. I get that little tingle from behind my penis telling me it's time to cum. I don't even try to fight it, it's like my 5th time today, I'm ready for this to be done so I can to sleep with two beautiful naked women.
At the very least Carolyn doesn't seem disappointed. She blithely climbs off my rapidly disintegrating erection and gives me a loving kiss once Sarah climbs off my head. Sarah heads over to the lights, turns them off and climbs back into bed beside me. I enjoy the body heat that surrounds me as I lie down thinking.
As I take stock of the day, I realize that my angst regarding Nancy has all but vanished. In fact I was happy for her, I now know how lacking my life would be if I were limited to one sexual partner. I got Carolyn and my sister beside me, to both I'm very grateful, and even more grateful for the possibility of even more lovers. I don't care who might judge, after experiencing the two of them I realize that anyone who could cast judgement in this reveling in each other's presence and sexuality is a downright fool.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoThis one was weird, not gonna lie. I got through three pages which means you compelled me so congratulations on that. As another anonymous reader said however, the grammar and spelling errors were a very distracting component. I felt like I was reading the thoughts of an anime character named Saiki K. Now that’s not exactly a bad thing as he’s hilarious in his over critical thinking but I didn’t like how much you broke the fourth wall and how little you stuck to the script you were trying to write. I’m also not a fan of how ridiculously bland the dialogue between Arnold and each girl was. Aside from the one or two paragraphs where you focus on the conflict Carolyn goes through in the first leap of faith into taking her clothes off to swim nothing else really meshed well in my opinion. I’m no expert or author for that matter I’m just a guy who reads here and cums to a good story like the rest of us but an editor’s proofreading would’ve been greatly appreciated. Best of luck in your future stories. Maybe I’ll come back for pages 4-6 some other time.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI thoroughly enjoyed your story. Unlike other comments, I liked the point of view of the narrative, and I did find the two stories went together. I always try to see if I can put myself in the story. I could. I loved it. Thanks so much for your entry, and I look forward to future installments.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI had almost dropped reading further because of tbe awkward opening which wasn't very tantalizing and difficult to emotionally understand. However there was something about the quality of the writing that made me continue. Now at the end of the story I'm still somewhat intrigued by the unusual way of telling the story, but do also feel that the style conveys a certain distance and detachment that isn't all too good for an erotic story where one presumably wants the reader to get emotionally sucked up. How do you expect readers to get there if the protagonist stays too 'cool'?
The emotional aspects of the introduction to Carolyn was interesting and carried potential for a complex and intriguing story which it also started out as. But then you apparently came into a hurry, and the story thereafter quickly degenerated to a simplistic fuck-buddies kind of story with an emotionally half-cooked sibcest and a haphazard cuckold aspect thrown in. Too much going on at the same time, so you were gaping too high to pull it all off in an emotionally understandable and credible way within the (already quite high) number of pages devoted to this story.
Really nice try -- keep on writing!
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoFirstly, IMO two stories big mistake. Secondly, the spelling errors and grammatical errors are many and not just typos. Next is the confusion with who Arnold is actually fucking in the second story is just appalling. Finally, this was all about him getting his rocks off without a care for the girls and I found it too repetitive. If you had concentrated on 'The Cabin' and cut the crap about feeling bad over a break up yet masturbating over your ex as it was tiresome and went on too long. The cabin had the makings of an excellent story and could have included some other naked adventures in the course of the story add a cliff hanger ending perhaps like a visit from parents catching everyone in a compromising position and how they react. You really need to edit a story before submitting and that is not using spell checker it is reading what you have written or getting somebody else to read and correct it for you.
Anonymousalmost 5 years ago...there certain were positive and deeply erotic elements and the rapid transformation of Carolyn fits the idea of 'becoming' comfortable with one's nudity - it was all a "private" affair. A handyman at the cabin deciding to share ONLY the nudity might have broadened the social dynamics, or parents returning home to find siblings asleep on the sofa, nude, with the TV glowing in the background could have also. Nour complaints, only minor thoughts on where the social nudity *might have* gone. Definitely write more! Other characters, other scenarios. The first nudist tourists exploring a city like New York and visiting the observation deck of the Empire State building or going up the new Freedom tower to visit a relative who also happens to be the nude CEO of America's first fully nudist-friendly corporate business. There is more to being nude than having sex, sex and more sex! We still enjoy life in so many other, routine ways. July, 2019.
