All Comments on 'Naked on Campus'

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Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel8920 days ago

It's sorely in need of descriptions. A bit more detail would add a lot. Describing what the characters look like is essential when the focus is nudity because we need to know what the characters look like... well, naked.

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I don't do this for the money just the dopamine when strangers give me 5 stars. I have just uploaded my third tale to this site. A short exhibitionist tale with no sex. My current long project is on 85k words and probably half done. No idea what I'll do with it if I ever ...