All Comments on 'Nan Ch. 01'

Nice premise.

Needed more dialog about how what was being done felt to the one doing and the one to whom it was being done.

Four stars.

Well done!

Superb writing style and an interesting, different, plot. There was a slow buildup from the survey to his explanation of sexual stimuli. Her willingness to follow his information and instructions was foreshadowed by the story's title and the end result was expected. Nicely done and realistic sex scene. Ethics be damned.