All Comments on 'Nancy Mitchell's Other Life Ch. 01'

Wow! Thanks for sharing.

I don't think I've ever quite wanted a part two quite so much!

Oh yes, omg, yes, feel every word and emotion.

Well, a very hot beginning to many chapters of Nancy's adventures. There are so many options so please start slow and build up to her complete downfall in life. Please, please continue.

Thanks to all who commented, liked, and rated! Second chapter is submitted, it will probably take a few days to be approved. The US holidays might slow chapter 3 down a bit, but I'll get it to you as soon as I can.

Interesting premise.

But totally lacking in details about the actual sex. Just saying something happened doesn't make it erotic. Details. Setails. Details. Needed.

Three stars.

Hey anon from 20/12/2022, that's a helpful comment, thanks! I like to fill in the blanks myself because I know what I like best, but some readers might want it more detailed/graphic. I'll give that a try in the next installment.

Great start! I was alerted to this story through a discord server I follow, I’m glad I found it. Thank You!