All Comments on 'Natalie - The Body Builder Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great cliffhanger, please don't make us wait too long for what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is a prologue and not a story. Good descriptive narrative and minimal character development - but still erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love it so far but definitely needs another chapter or so! Excellent theme presentation!

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I started writing due to some relationship trauma. My therapist suggested that I should write about the good times and bad from my past. In essence a combo/form of journaling and writing a memoir. Anyhow, it’s evolved into me writing about some of my sexual experiences in my y...

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