All Comments on 'Natasha and Tyler Ch. 01'

I injoyed this first chapter although it could have been a little longer. Please continue writing this story.

Need to work on Grammar and sentence structure

no background or character development. missing words misspelled words and just plain poor writing. an unrealistic rush to sex and no end add it up and you get a first draft that never should have been posted with out major editing. delete and rewrite now.