All Comments on 'Nate's Birthday Surprise Pt. 04'

by GentlemanFlynn

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LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 2 years ago

Why is Nate such a pathetic, submissive, cuck? His slut wife, who has now moved on the fucking firstly Denise (without discussing it with Nate) then an arranged fuck session with Jim and his huge cock. But shithead Nate didn't bother to also fuck Denise. Why not? This seems to be all about his slutty wife getting to fuck multiple other people, while cucky just watches. A tad one side, don't you think?

Plus, I didn't go back and read the earlier chapters. Is Marianne actually Carmen? Cuck Nate is always making that comparison. But she claims she has never had anyone else. What are we meant to believe?

snarbozsnarbozover 2 years ago

Could have been a better husband wife connection at the end..Kind of abrupt

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Didn't like it. U made Nate look like the stupidest human being that ever was married to a woman. It was almost cartoonist!

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