by Tulrek
There was no real story here, just one long sex scene. Yes, that's what we look forward to in the stories here, but there should still be a build up to it.
I don't usually say this, the sex here went on way too long. Don't get me wrong, it was hot, it was just excessive. Maybe if you added a little more to the story, or at least some background for the characters it would've made up for it.