All Comments on 'Nathalie's Makeover Ch. 05'

Yea now she can be happy until he is bored. We all make choices and have to live with them.

Why do I suspect Nathan will be capitulating and taking her back. Yeah she's completely fucked up his life, but hey now he's a gay cocksucker. Funny how a bit of makeup and a dress suddenly turns you gay.

but I’m rooting for this poor mixed-up bastard. I hope he gets out and stays out. He’s clearly a one woman guy. He deserves to find a partner to share with that will keep him first and never humiliate him. I pray this author will let Nathan get out, find new love and be happy. Oh, and let that idiot wife realize what she’s done and what she’s lost when Yves dumps her when he can’t dominate Nathan anymore.

That’s the whole reason, I think, he’s there in the first place. He could give a fuck about the wife.

without Nathan being forced or unable to resist just going back to them. It's become a depressing story of mental and physical abuse. I'm only still here on the vague hope he doesn't capitulate. But maybe you're on of those "unending cruelty" type authors?

it's about time he got some balls, but as sadistic as yves is I bet he shows an edited video of nath at work. yves is also probably disappointed nath didn't jump at the offer as it probably more of a sex slave for the three partners instead of a real job. then he would really be blackballed from ever getting a job again with the lies that yves and his partners would be spreading

you brought in carol is she going to be somebody that nath's both sides of his persona could love and carol be happy with the two of them

what's nath going to do if viv becomes pregnant by yves ???

Nathan should leave since he is being raped by Ives. The videos of the spanking will help with the law.

I wear female clothes often. I have male and female partners but always consensual.

Ive been the submissive and the dominant. Always with safe words.

Cagivagurl as the writer is doing a great job. Although I would like to see Nathan get away from Ives and find someone who loves him. His wife certainly doesnt.

Amazing again, desperate to know what happens next.

I hope Nathan stands his ground. He is confused by his wife. Her consent and encouragement has led him down this road. He has tried to stand up for himself but his confusion and his wife's encouragement have lead to extreme sexual activity. He has has experienced emotional, physical and sexual feelings all at a very high level. It is like being drunk indicting the drunkard and then having a drunkard remorse. It is hard to sort things out with no support and understanding.

Nathan is getting no support and no validation for his feelings. He has been raped, coerced and forced into having sex. Sex should be consensual. He wants to return to his loving relationship with his wife but it seems that she does not want that. I hope he stays away for Yves and Viv comes back to him or is Carol in the wings?

And by that I mean for Nathan to be away from the two sadistic, controlling people in his life and hopefully find someone who can love him for him.

Nice to see Nathalie/Nathan take a stand, and stand up to Viv and Yves, what needs to happen is Carol comes and allows Nathan to be Nathan and bring Nathalie out but in a loving way

Another intriguing and emotional chapter in the lives of Vivian, Nathalie and Yves. Yes Nathalie was acting like a spoiled brat and had no business being rude and offensive at dinner like that. Alan was not being agressive, nasty or mean, only giving a sincere offer. Nathalie was nasty, rude and acted like a spoiled bitch. Marriage is love, honor and cherish .. for better or worse, for life. It seems to have become .. as long as it is fun .. that is not a serious commitment or deep lasting love. You need the maturity to fullfil your love"s interests, desires and aspirations while they do yours. This should be done in such a way that they each mutually come to almost, if not in reality, think of your partner first. Vivian and Nathalie have not made the effort to talk and work through this phase of their relationship .. Nathalie has become a selfish bitch with a child's reaction to her hurt ego .. Vivian is trying a bit more but letting herself be selfishly diverted from Nathalie"s hurt, uncertainty and fear and genuine concern for Vivian's respect. Nathalie needs to grow up and stop acting like a teen girl having a hissy fit about her girlfriend's other lustful interests. Love needs to continue to grow, adapt and mature to be enduring. I hope that Nathalie has some sense talked into her by a friend of someone close and Vivian too !!! I am looking forward to the next chapter .. I hope that Yves shows some fatherly wisdom also .. TG Tiffany , a romantic at heart, but an optimist also .. kiss 😘

Hope Nathalie escapes from this hell. She is better off alone with dildos.

REally great writing. The storytelling had me shaking by the end.

Part of their problem is that each was thinking for the other, and not speaking for herself. Kinda they have been all along, just worst in this chapter.

In this chapter, the main TG/CD theme fades, but it still runs through, along with mix of Loving Wives (you choose which one is being unreasonable), and BDSM (informal, unstructured) with some Reluctance/Non-con thrown in for fun.

As far as future goes, if Nathan wants to be himself, he'd better be ready for some blackmail at this stage, and ready to give some back. Getting clear of this will take much of what he currently thinks he has. I question if he has what it will take to do that. If he doesn't, then we will very likely be in NC/R.

Thanks for sharing this series.

I actually Applauded the last line. Finally he showed he had more spine than a slug.

I think the critiques I've read from some of these other reads are even more mentally disturbing than the sad sick characters in the story. People who read stories like they don't have any soul or humanity left in their empty lives..its very sobering.

get rid of both of them forever

Viv is a real bitch and Yves needs his dick cut off