All Comments on 'Nathalie's Makeover Ch. 06'

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darthnader19darthnader19over 4 years ago

Appreciate all the updates to the story. Love it so far really captivating

curricdcurricdover 4 years ago
Nathan makes a statement with his actions......

I am glad Nathan has stood up for himself. He is upset now but it is for the best. Viv may not have betrayed him but she has moved on and yet she still wants Nathan or I should say Natalie. She would not make love to Nathan when he asked. She did not really listen to his side of the story. She treated him like a slutty stranger and not like the person she proclaimed she once loved.

Nathan feels bad because he indirectly hurt Viv but that is collateral damage is an already damaged relationship. Viv has made her choice to submit a dominant man. Nathan deserves a relationship with a partner that will be consensual and satisfying to him and hopefully a accepting new woman in his life. I don't think Carol is a good choice since she is still friends with Viv.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

glad nate found and kept his balls alive

carol turns out she is just like viv and maybe a spy and sneek to try to get nate back involved with viv and yves, wouldn't be surprised if she hasn't given viv and yves a turn in the bed. a spy undercover

nath needs to find somebody who will let him be himself/herself in nath's timetable

with yves control over viv, nath better hire someone that can abdicate for him in court we the videos come out in court and public record

nath might want to talk mike privately and tell him the bombshell first before it blindsides him at work. if mike knows what could come he may not give two shits about it(crossdressing) with yves being that controlling he will get viv to try to get some type of payback in court. hopefully he will get a judge to see what a smoke screen it is and not let them get the upper hand in court

nath needs to get prepared for war in the court room because yves will be a witness and say nath enjoyed it. it will depend on what the adultery law say

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hate the wait

Can’t wait to see how this story plays out! Please don’t keep us waiting too long.

GoodGirlMollyGoodGirlMollyover 4 years ago

Good for Nath for standing their ground. Is sad Viv can't see that it isn't about Nath needing to accept themselves, but her needing to accept Yves went too far. Hopefully the cycle doesn't repeat again with Carol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Awesome!!!!

I could see this excellent story going in so many different directions after your last chapter. I really appreciate how you have kept Nathan's perspective strong and kept the story real even though following Nathalie down the rabbit hole of her submissive journey is also a lot of fun!

This is a most excellent story so far and you seem to keep breathing new life into it as you go..... Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

This is one of the best stories ever read on the website. I mean the perfect mix of the beauty of dressing which arouses your feminine side and the urge to pay back against Yves arousing that chivalrous feeling and your mind goes into a complete roller coaster ride. Would love to see the battle raging on with Nathan and Yves pulling different strings to dominate the fight.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

now you have a great story going finally one of the humiliated ones gets some revenge don't stop getting real good next will be time to fix carols smart ass

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

It Nath finally decided that he not bi-sexual

He may like getting pegged when he knows a caring female lover is on the other end. For not standing up earlier to Yves he could of been of afraid of being"outed" at work with Yves spinning it where Nath was coming on to him.

It's understandable to enjoy the textures and feeling when womens clothes but that alone does not make a guy to start to craving a real dick.

Yves is a bi-sexual person that does not want to be outed, he knows that Nath would never reveal himself intentionally as Nathalie so he is safe.

The marriage is over and as soon as he can get divorced the better.

Viv will be vindictive in court and show the photos to try get a better settlement. The best thing he could do is tell Mike what is going on and say he felt threatened by Yves is why it went so far and he didn't want to hurt the project they was working on.

But Viv is going to find out Yves is a player and wants destination people to have sex with

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 4 years ago
Nathalie is still a petty bitch

Nathalie is still being a nasty little bitch focusing on getting satisfaction by hurting Yves. Unfortunately he is hurting everyone including Viv and himself by letting himself degrade into a petty, whiny and vindictive bitch .. he is acting worse than a teen girl when her boyfriend dumps her for a sexier model. He needs to grow up before his life is irretrievably poisoned. Going there is another chapter .. TG Tiffany

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 3 years ago

Still well written. Excellent storytelling.

Of course, Viv was correct about what living on hate will do, sooner or later, and regardless if it is deserved or not. Nathan called it "an empty churning feeling". I felt that, too, at the end of this chapter.

Of course, if this doesn't bring out the blackmail, it will still be interesting to see where you take them.

Thanks again.

trianetrianeabout 2 years ago

As per usual, your protagonist is an uptight arrogant one-dimensional prig who's so overwhelmed by self-loathing and afraid of embarrassment that they'd rather burn down the entire world than accept who they are. These stories all seem to follow more or less the same arc, where the weak and pathetic "hero" always convinces himself of their own faux virtuosity with a steaming pile of sophistic, self-righteous rationalizations, while he merrily destroys others' lives solely to salve his own weak, frail ego, terror and latent homo/trans-phobias.. 🤦‍♀️🙄😝

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanalmost 2 years ago

Only part of this series I have read. My thoughts so far, Yves is a predator, Viv is a self-centered bitch, Carol will be bad news if she keeps talking about Nattalie being a girl and with a guy. I can't imagine the "stupidity" of a soon to be ex-wife pleading for another chance while wearing her lover's engraved chocker. Really?

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanalmost 2 years ago

forgot. what about the BJ video that Viv watches? Blackmail to come in the future???????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I cheered Nath. His conniving wife and Yves deserved everything they got.

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