All Comments on 'Nathalie's New World Ch. 04'

time to pack your bags David and go live with Steph or just by yourself that bitch and the bastard Terry will only humiliate you . you don't need that shit get rid of the whore another good one only lets have David win for a change really like your stories as you usually have the guy win hope you do the same with this one

Nathalie definitely needs to put mia in her place kick her to the curb or go on a break maybe have terry dump her for soneone else while Nathalie gets on with sophie then maybe have her come back with roles reversed

from you. Does this all reflect on your own actual life as a "gurl" did you get pressured into things you didn't want to do? You seem unwilling to ever write the lead guy role in your stories as someone prepared to actually stand up for what they want.

I usually like your stories but the humiliation goes to far for my taste sometimes.

This one definitely went to far for me I hope Nathalie makes a stand in the next chapter, because I’m not sure how much more of it I can take.

Thanks KS

run Dave she is not your wife anymore she is now your pimp she had you used by Stephanie and now she has given you to her boyfriend soon it will be others get out while you can

Ah, the last two paragraphs tell the tale, do they not? There's some hope for getting relationships sorted out. However, more than likely s/he will do something impulsive that doesn't really sort anything.

Great writing.

Please continue this story. You left it at such a tantalizing cliff hanger, we must know what happens next.

i liked to see the divorce because its not like she loves him anymore

Great story, please continue

It's been a year + please continue this amazing story :(

OK so there was no point to this story really. Its just a masturbation Cuckold clean up story..Ok fair enough

disappointing, usually Cagivagurl....writes stories that have a plot..damn

I just read llyrf's comment and had to laugh..Um I think the wife NEVER Loved her husband, I think the story explains she was only ever using him for a meal ticket while she slept with other men. The Fact she adjusted to the situation so quickly and easily in the way she and her new LATEST Boy toy treated her husband SCREAMS Serial Cheater. Someone cheating for the first time or even the second or third would never be able to react THAT quickly to using her own Husband a man she is suppose to respect and love that badly that quickly..its human nature...it takes time to develop a belligerence that completely filled with contempt. Why is it so few people who read these stories have so little understanding of human nature?..shit its in everyone its not like its difficult to see or notice.. WE all have things that make us the same, everyone instinctively knows right from wrong. You can ignore it and pretend you don't notice things that are wrong but eventually everything comes to the surface and is exposed to the light of day. you can run away,,,or you can deal with it that's the choice. Ive liked that about Cagivagurl's writing, she spends the time (normally) developing the characters and explaining the inner turmoil the decision process goes through. She makes the Characters seem more real to life as she develops their personalities..that was not in this story..well not if this is where it ends LOL

Still hoping you will comeback to complete this one day.

This was so unbelievably dumb. The author thinks so too because he never bothered finishing the story.

Mia is a completely vile human. Maybe not even human. Being in the closet IS terrifying and real. If more young men were fucked in the ass there would be no population problem. It is transformative. Analgasms cause you to lose control of your body and you spew cum. I was a teacher’s cum bucket from the age of fifteen to thirty. Skinny man long thick cock. He kissed me and I felt his cocking my tummy. He taught me everything. He brought friends over and well mom asked me why boxers were full of cum.

NATHALIE'S NEW WORLD CH. 04 CH 05 AND ENDING COMING

like to see one more chapter, wife is a total bitch