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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a fantastic premise! I would love to see more of Mother AI in the future~

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5/5 premise

3/5 implementation (I'm being picky here)

This felt like more of an outline than a complete story - all the key points are there, but the details are a little lacking. Great premise though.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

You think as smart as she was, she could out think the AI. Captain Kirk always did, but then he was a man so we're right back where we started. Strange little story but it did make me a little horny, lol.

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I'm proud of my sexuality. It's strange. I've mastruabated to the fall of rain in a thunderstorm, or the slant of sunlight on a floor. I get turned on by rich black earth and really fertile gardens. I might be better served by describing what doesn't turn me on. It's also dar...