by Stephany1975
Atmospheric and sensual. Just a couple of points:
Masseur = male, masseuse = female.
First paragraph has the word 'massage' 5 times.
And 'my sir' is clunky.
Still worth 4*
J
A masseuse is a woman who gives massages; a man who gives them is a masseur.
Badly written nonsense. Rading so may simple sentences is just boring join some together.