All Comments on 'Needs and Desires'

Her abdomen seemed to be the flogging climax. But why not her pussy? Isn't that the ultimate place to flog or whip? Maybe that comes later.

Needs editing for punctuation, spelling and correcting misused homonyms.

Very sexy, well written. Could use more proofreading for typos, etc.

I like this story and look forward to you continuing the tale. This is a true love story if I read it correctly but I would like each tale to be longer and a bit more descriptive. carry on and I will continue reading as I feel you have a long story to tell.

Nice setup of a scenario many of us married guys would love... keep them coming please!

Enjoyed it, especially as an introduction to a more lengthy delineation of just how a relationship such as this could work over the long term. Most such stories set up a situation such that the wife or husband is restrained/dominated with a clearly underlying element of love--and then deteriorate (in my view) to a less nuanced situation of humiliation. Whether it be "gentle femdom" to sadistic brutality or "loving control" to absolute mastery--the stereotypical structures become set in place and the characters diminish in stature into less complex beings.

Compliments on the quality of writing; the composition and plot development are quite good. More please.

MLJ

Very nice as a first story. I'd love to read more.

Please add more