All Comments on 'Neela's Presentation - Day 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More please

This is amazing and I can’t wait til the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Really short

There could have been more humiliation and degradation by the guards. She could have been put in the stocks which would have made her breasts hang down with her ass in the air. No beatings? Well, I guess that they could not mark her too much since she had to be naked anyway. The guards could have peed on her, or spit on her, etc. to further her humiliation. Neela will still not be Queen. Something will happen that will take that away from her. Still hoping for a good ending.

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