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All Comments on 'Leela's Adventure with Bhavik'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

…and then???? U came?…so u pissed on the ending?

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

You definitely need a better editor. There are five grammatical errors in the first paragraph comprising just five lines.

About the story, the less said, the better.

how_eihow_ei4 months agoAuthor

Sorry for the typos in the intro, that was not editor's mistake.

Appreciate the good and bad feedback!

stories are left partially open for future stories to be added.

Bartleby73Bartleby734 months ago

It is a true life story, and I appreciate that. Otherwise there could have been a better ending. Leela clearly deserves more men.

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