All Comments on 'Neglected Woman Pt. 04'

Like the theme “neglected woman” and Sarah’s honesty and willingness/almost eagerness to explore. The characters work well with the storyline. My only complaint is the sex comes off a bit mechanical — longish paragraphs describing in some detail the action followed by 1 or 2 lines of dialogue declaring climax/wonderful orgasm. Merge/blend dialogue with descriptive element — intensifies the erotic/the sex; after all, Sarah is exploring her libido. On board for more.

short and sweet

I liked it. Better than most with a refreshing honesty.

But here my question: with all her new found experience, why doesn’t she make a stronger effort to connect with her husband?

Why have you written him to be so…..absent mentally and emotionally?

He has to be feeling alone and neglected.

She's a lying whore. Stupid story.

Ic69cunter likes it? Means it's a trash story.

1 star - WRONG CATEGORY - should be in lesbian or fetish, NOT LW,

There is nothing loving about this SLUT.

Definitely the wrong category. Worthless read.

I have to wonder how stupid you have to be to tag something correctly as "lesbian sex" yet not be able to find the Lesbian Sex category to post it in.