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by Paladin1188

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DquiotiDquioti8 months ago

Sloppy writing. He is naked in the first third of the story, then clothed in the last? You usually do much better.

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I have written a variety of material but would welcome collaborations. I do read my comments if you wish to leave them. As Paul McCartney said, " I wanna be a paperback writer'

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