All Comments on 'Negotiations with Jenny'

A very promising beginning! I hope you'll write more on this story. You're quickly turning into one of my favorite Literotica writers. It makes my day when I see something new from you!

Not my kink, but an excellent story nonetheless. Your writing style and pacing are both spot on!

Clever premise.

Too short.

Barely a setup for what's to follow.

Needed much more teasing by her.

Needed more physical contact with her.

Needed dialog where he's forced to tell her what he imagines/fantasizes about her.

Three stars.