by ValensGirl
Clever premise.
Too short.
Barely a setup for what's to follow.
Needed much more teasing by her.
Needed more physical contact with her.
Needed dialog where he's forced to tell her what he imagines/fantasizes about her.
Three stars.
Not my kink, but an excellent story nonetheless. Your writing style and pacing are both spot on!
A very promising beginning! I hope you'll write more on this story. You're quickly turning into one of my favorite Literotica writers. It makes my day when I see something new from you!