All Comments on 'Neighborhood Play'

The story seemed rushed, if you squeezed a sentence or two between sex actions, I think it might have been better. Also, I think, your last line in the story was a missed opportunity, "Peanuts anyone?" could have been answered by "did you just say, "peanuts anyone or penis anyone?"

Amazing and clever. No need for character development here as everyone knows them all. I did have to look up the twins. They were the cute little hippy dancers at the school Christmas party. Made me incredibly horny. Can’t wait to read part two!

I love it!!

"Peanuts, anyone?" Was a perfect ending. Fun story. Lucy going to the kitchen was the best description of a well fucked woman I've ever read. Well done.