All Comments on 'Neighborly Ch. 04'

Love the storyline, the characters, and the plot. The dialogue is well done, the back-and-forth conversation is a major part of one of the elements I enjoy most about a story. Ms. Ellen has a subtle yet humiliating way with actions and words, putting poor Jackie-boy further and further backed into a corner with no escape. The foot fetish aspect is done quite well, amongst his other duties. There are quite a few possibilities to make this a lengthy downward spiral for his submission, not only to Ms. Ellen, but ...? Fantasy writing is at its best when it's a stretch, but yet almost believable as it uses everyday life in the real world to see female domination and male submission play out. Look forward to many more parts to this.

Loving this so much

Part 5 soon i hope

I’m following you now

PLEASE keep these chapters coming!

Wonderful story. Please keep adding chapters.

Maybe an idea is for her to assign lines to write that he can write as homework to further learn the rules. Like "I will not use the word but" 200 times or something like that.