All Comments on 'Neighbors Ch. 22'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

fucking great and awesome

please continue. i like your writing style, its a good combination from building up story lines and not being over the top!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Giving Amber his expensive car keys for $1 was so hot. I'm gonna love the next chapter while Justin's getting his cock serviced by 3 beautiful woman and bank is in stationary mode in the corner with Justin's or the girls socks in his mouth

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

... so in what reality does a technological cage not need to be recharged? All those senors? All the electrical components to send shocks and blue tooth? The cage would be dead from battery life in a matter of an hour, not to mention it would be clunky and impossible to be made waterproof when having electrical conduction. Not to mention this story is just getting repetitive same old teasing same old everything there is no real buildup because you've hit your plateau. Fyi lawyers don't handle car title transfers and those have to be taken care of at the dmv.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Truly this story is the best damn thing I’ve read on this site ever , I would give almost anything to be in Chris’s shoes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

what an amazing story, as a pathetic cuck myself, can't wait to read the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

First thing I do everyday is look for new chapters to this story. Ignore the one negative comment. The storytelling is excellent and it and keeps getting better and hotter! As scary as it is I find myself relating to Chris! I get it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

How low can Chris go? Will he also sell his house to Amber for 1$? That would be so hot. How about his company?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loving this, can't wait for the next chapter. can totally see Chris becoming Chrissy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So glad you didn't leave us. Love this story and checking Every day hoping for a new update. You, my friend, are a fantastic writer. I can't thank you enough for this great story .

stevezybachstevezybachabout 2 years ago

Love where this story is going! Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

i ve been waiting for the

new chapter like ALOTTTTTT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Amazing story, hope there is more to come!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Here we are again, checking every day :) Waiting for the next part in this fantastic story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very much enjoying this and looking forward to he next parr

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Best story in years! My all time favorite

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Keep checking to see if there is more, this is extraordinary and I hope it continues

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

No new chapter? Am I the only one checking Every morning?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I check almost daily too. Talk about a tease.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Checking everyday for this amazing story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Love this story so much. My penis throbs so much when reading. Look forward to the next chapter when you have the time. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Another day, another check in. Please write some more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I check for a new chapter every morning

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Me to :(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Interesting storyline but too much padding.

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