by WillSuckYou
Your love for Jay and his for you is apparent. Great start. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to your continued story.
I'm glad to see you back again. This is a really nice start; I hope it turns out as good as your other stories.
Great start. This is the first I’ve read of your collection. Will continue to read the others to get a good idea of your writing.
Bi
I really enjoyed your story. Reminded me of something that happend to me when I was that age. Looking forward to part 2.
I like this. I have a friend that I'd like to approach, but I'm afraid that he would not be on the same page. I would love to be his bottom!
Wow. It was like I was in the room with you guys. Thank you for sharing ur thoughts.
Loved the spontaneity of this story and also agree with FitGuy that although the story is hot, their genuine affection for each other comes through..stories like this make me want to accept that I love cock..
JT
I LOVED IT!! I thought this was gonna be a great story and, soon as my name popped up I was sold! I love it when I can really put myself into the story like this! Now, for the fellow tin foil hat club members, I just hit on this today. I have not read or commented for a year but a couple months ago began reading and commenting. I noticed immediately more stories with my name in them and when I pulled this one up I thought wow! Then I said whoa! Ya think AI writes this stuff based on comments sometimes? Not at all thinking real folks aren't writing 'cause they are, and the stories like this are amazing, just thought it was weird enough to point out!