All Comments on 'Neural Receptors Ch. 01'

by fishgullet

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Revenge

He needs to fine a woman who wronged him and have his public revenge!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
not bad

good story and line of events lining up, keep up good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Good Start - Want More

Like I said, good start. I like stories where some schmo gets the power to get all the hot girls. Hope more is coming soon. By the way, pretty well written. Can see you took some effort with it.

Tbanx.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Thankz , Its plausible & fun

A well written & enjoyable 1st chap. Due my own kinkz, always enjoy the sense of astonishment , humiliation & eventual acceptance of anothers power over women in MC stories. But I enjoyed your "style". Had a nice 'flow'

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