by leph76
Continued from my comment below.
Have to ask. How long before the next part? Your history shows quite a wait between parts. I hope that's not the case here.
Jlyn1 - What, you don't like a good cliffhanger? Sorry, it just felt like the chapter was getting longer than I wanted it to be, and adding in the reveal would have added a lot more. The next chapter is almost ready and hopefully just a couple weeks at most, been having a bit of an issue getting things the way I want them while trying to maintain some realism. I apologize for leaving you hanging. I know some people won't be happy with the cliffhanger ending, and the rating may suffer, but in the end I think it works best for the story overall. I will try to make sure the wait for the next chapter is more reasonable. Thank you for your interest and comment!