by storyfella
loved it so far and the story is wide open to go on for a long time.
Magnificent storytelling. Just enough imagination to be compelling & want more !
He could find himself at the mercy of the inmates of this particular home for the incurably insane. If he hears of someone planning to build a brick wall in the home, only one thing to do. Run.
I’m more curious than aroused reading this. The shaving scene could have gone on longer and Jasmine could have enjoyed him more but I suppose that leaves it open for things to come. Looking forward to part 3.
OttawaGuy50s