All Comments on 'Never too Old Ch. 02'

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mammoetmammoetover 4 years ago
keep going

loved it so far and the story is wide open to go on for a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Magnificent storytelling. Just enough imagination to be compelling & want more !

DearfieldDearfieldover 4 years ago
Great story

This story could develop into a nice series.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago
Be worried, very worried

He could find himself at the mercy of the inmates of this particular home for the incurably insane. If he hears of someone planning to build a brick wall in the home, only one thing to do. Run.

OttawaGuy50sOttawaGuy50sover 4 years ago
Curious

I’m more curious than aroused reading this. The shaving scene could have gone on longer and Jasmine could have enjoyed him more but I suppose that leaves it open for things to come. Looking forward to part 3.

OttawaGuy50s

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More please

Waiting to hear more about the naughty lady's of the village

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Hot Flash****

Thanks for sharing.

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Due to ill health as a child meant I missed out on education. One of my worst subjects was English. I've never written anything in my life apart from the odd letter. I don't pretend to be a great writer and can't imagine ever being so. I started writing for my own pleasure and...

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