All Comments on 'Neverland Pt. 02'

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sport404sport404over 1 year ago

I liked this story, and feel you have it going in the right place but just not there yet. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Good storyline, but inventive vocabulary choices…

Also her saying “uhm” instead of just describing the noises rips me right out of the moment 😞

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