by Aimee OCalahan
OOOOoooooooooohh wow that was the most amazing story, I'm still shuddering... truly great the story line and your writing absolutely perfect, could not have been written any better.
Brilliant work - built up the suspence, simmered the passion to the point of an explosive climax. More please!
Wow very hot story!!! I got so damm hard reading it I was wishing I was Avery fucking Nicole.
Ms OCalahan
What a superb piece of fiction. It has the substance to be an equally superb short story that will have publishers drooling. Thanks for sharing it with all of us.