All Comments on 'New Day for Nikki'

by Aimee OCalahan

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ImaginatrixImaginatrixalmost 20 years ago
Wow

OOOOoooooooooohh wow that was the most amazing story, I'm still shuddering... truly great the story line and your writing absolutely perfect, could not have been written any better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Awesome!

Brilliant work - built up the suspence, simmered the passion to the point of an explosive climax. More please!

OmahaBoy2003OmahaBoy2003almost 20 years ago
awesome!!!!!

Wow very hot story!!! I got so damm hard reading it I was wishing I was Avery fucking Nicole.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Impressive!!

Ms OCalahan

What a superb piece of fiction. It has the substance to be an equally superb short story that will have publishers drooling. Thanks for sharing it with all of us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
yea baby

All I can say is more more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved it

this is absolutely great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Wow what a great story i really enjoyed it hope u write more will done.

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