by WritersDen
absolutly amazing story, I hope there is a sequel in the works, also it would be cool, if you added "free use" as a tag, cause it fits there
This story is hot as fuck. One of the hottest I've read in a while. Looking forward to more!
It wouldn't hurt to slow down a little in future chapters though, more descriptions, a tiny bit more attention to continuity, but over all I loved it.
This story is hot. Unfortunately the way it is written - there is little room for growth of the story line and characters. It would be interested to see a prequel story line written based on the day of the accident and different chapters written from different people's perspectives.