All Comments on 'New in Town'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

HELLO, I'm 34...I'm gay...I have AIDS...I'm NEW IN TOWN....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

absolutly amazing story, I hope there is a sequel in the works, also it would be cool, if you added "free use" as a tag, cause it fits there

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Love the story, Hope it continues in some form

TheDrowTheDrowalmost 3 years ago

This story is hot as fuck. One of the hottest I've read in a while. Looking forward to more!

It wouldn't hurt to slow down a little in future chapters though, more descriptions, a tiny bit more attention to continuity, but over all I loved it.

TheDrowTheDrowover 2 years ago

Very much hopeful that this story will continue!

sexymeupsexymeupalmost 2 years ago

SOUNDS LIKE A GREAT JOB TO ME, I COULD HANDLE LIVING THERE, LOL

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This story is hot. Unfortunately the way it is written - there is little room for growth of the story line and characters. It would be interested to see a prequel story line written based on the day of the accident and different chapters written from different people's perspectives.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

LMAO! Love it!

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