by bondagekitten775
Aw that’s so sweet, clearly the way to win a girl’s heart is kidnapping, rape and repeated death threats....the ‘rape fantasy” is a common one because society has brainwashed people into thinking of sex as wrong or dirty. It isn’t, because sex between consenting adults is frickin’ awesome. A ‘fantasy rape’ is a scenario where the ‘victim’ is absolved of any responsibility or blame.
The story attempts to introduce the concept of this being consensual by claiming that the rapist wants a D/s relationship with the victim and that he will give her the choice to accept or reject him??!
Call me old fashioned if you will but I prefer my sexual partners to use their words and just ask first. The entire thing gives a really poor impression of D/s and bdsm.
I didn't buy the set up for a second - the plot and character's reactions were wholly unconvincing and therefore I was unable to empathise or care about what was happening to her. These are the elements you need to work on to develop your writing.
i really hope i can experiance something like this one day, amazing story thank you :)
Thank you for reading my story and voting, everyone. I'm pleased you all enjoy it! I didn't think it would go over this well, so I'll see if I can type up a new chapter for you to enjoy. Please keep up the voting, and especially feedback on how to make it better!
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I do hope so -- this was a terrific read -- well done!
5 *s and please write more -- soon!