New Man Pt. 05

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Isaac was seated on his big chair, legs up, of course. I crashed down on the couch, and surprising me, he set aside his book and came to sit beside me while I stared blankly at the wall above the TV.

"Was it a fun game?" he asked.

"Pretty terrible," I said, chuckling. "You didn't miss much. Dakota was very nice, though."

I ate while he turned on the TV and found a kids' channel. I was so tired. All I could think about was the tub upstairs, and a good long soak. As I half-dozed through slow bites, we relaxed, both of us silent for a while. When commercials hit, Isaac turned the TV off again and looked at me.

"Dad?"

"Hm?"

"Tomorrow night, can we do something?"

"Sure. What do you want to do?"

"I don't know," he said. "Maybe go do some pop flies or something? Just the two of us for a while?"

That startled me. In all this, I'd almost forgotten the purpose of why I was dating so many women. Well, okay, yeah, the sex was a great big amazing part of it too, but Isaac was first and forever my priority, not my own fun. I set down the food, and grabbed him in a hug. He looked baffled and pushed me away, giggling. I smacked his knee and said, "Absolutely we can. But tonight you gotta tell me about your new book."

"Aw, it's fantasy, you don't even like that," he said, but there was a shy hope in his eyes too.

"Maybe not, but that doesn't mean I don't want to hear all about it."

"Okay!" he said, and as he launched into a description of orcs chasing a hapless thief across a war-torn city, I leaned back, exhausted, deliriously happy, and I listened.


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LoisKnight69LoisKnight6912 months ago

The public sex with the twins was stupid but also disrespectful to them and everyone else who was present. The pretending that Lionel cares about his son has gotten tiresome.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Lionel is a jerk. Also he is a totally unrealistic jerk. As of page 5 there is nothing good about him. He claims to care so much about his son Isaac but Morgan is correct that he is setting a terrible example. His harem is teaching Isaac that women are simply objects. That's fine for a story but not fine for a story masquerading as a lesson in morality.

The "twins" are a nonsensical fantasy. The twins are presented as being fabulously beautiful, cock hungry, but sex starved college girls. Cock hungry and sex starved don't go together when describing beautiful 22-year-old college girls. The idea that two such girls would share all their fantasies with three women near 30 years of age is ridiculous.

The idea that three supermodels (Jenna, Sarah, and Yvonne) who have been banging men on a steady basis would suddenly decide to share Lionel, while renouncing sex with others, is absurd.

Taking Isaac on his date with Yvonne and then bringing him back to a babysitter so the dad Lionel can go bang Yvonne was one of the stupidest things ever written.

The story would be much better and more believable if Lionel was presented as a guy who just fucked every woman he could but kept it quiet from his son. The boy is supposed to be upset about his mother and father's divorce. Lionel's openly having a harem is not consistent with Lionel worrying about Isaac's State of mind.

The story has become as stupid as it is ridiculous.

vanyevanyeover 1 year ago

Silly that he's basically had one date with any of them and he's already trying to fit them into "mom" category.

S_FoxS_Foxover 1 year ago

The public sex with the twins is so wrong/macho fantasy.

Have given previous chapters 5* - this only deserves 1*

auhunter04auhunter04almost 2 years ago

Recently I read another similar in theme to this, but after about chapter 5, I quit because everything became fill in the blanks with a different name

This has every chapter being its own work - that took work, lotsssss of work. while interweaving the same characters,

I am very impressed, a hearty well done

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