All Comments on 'New Moon Ch. 05-06'

This did not end the way that I thought it could. Maybe as an American I just see herself tracking them down and pulling a 'girl with a dragon tatoo' or just putting one in the head. But I get that the rugby took care of it but I guess Im more of a hands on kind of girl.

Thanks for the comment. I thought about that style ending, but given her relationship w/ Ken throughout, I felt it would have been out of character. I can see her leading the rugby team in a tracking down effort, but I didn't see her as Wonder Woman. She's probably like you, tough, but not crazy. I also like leaving things hanging. You knew if they ever tried anything again, she'd be there to make their lives hell.

loved the story... thought for sure Erin and her boyfriend would die. The ending was great that they managed to live, Erin got the hush money and while she has mental scars, she didn't get pregnant or and STDs. great read!!

I really liked this story. Apart from being very well written it was not the usual fare that I have come to expect and enjoy on Lit. Whilst New Moon was not completely credible I still bought into the scenes. It felt very real. I particularly liked Ivan, you done a really excellent job of creating a darkly erotic character. I would love to see more of him.

I will look through your submissions and hopefully find someone else as compelling!