All Comments on 'New Order of the Ages Ch. 10'

by SEVERUSMAX

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Boring..........

Lots of "small talk" and allmost no action.Also, despite your claim the Orsini brothers are bisexuels, you have yet, to write a Gay scene and all the Orsini's male "slaves" seams like have dissappear from the story...:)

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 6 years agoAuthor
You must have missed the scene between Larry and Dan.

Larry is mentioned and described as having actually fucked Dan, I believe, as the Top, surprisingly, despite being a slave.

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