All Comments on 'New Prostitue on the Block Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great story again. Looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodle11 months ago

Women don’t become prostitutes because they like sex, they do so out of desperation. Sex for money quickly becomes a job and condoms are a fucking must.

Getting an STD is all to easy, nevermind yeast infections, UTI’s, unplanned pregnancy etc etc. and these all affect your ability to make money. Throw in the drugs that become a part of your life both as a control and strung out whores will eat shit if it gets them another fix.

So, don’t try to make it erotic. Prostitution, street walking, even Craigslist are dangerous and nothing worse than a dead whore.

bearbulk93bearbulk9311 months ago

Nice Non Consent Fantasy with a good insight into our broken lived and broken family relationships. A prostitute one told me she never suffered from PMS and she is still going past 55 'we had fun' its all about who is in control.

blunderwolfblunderwolf11 months ago

Please continue, promising start. Please focus on having her fuck more and more men and keep track of the numbers. A high and ever growing body count is erotic in these kind of corruption stories.

maxhardcorebigdickmaxhardcorebigdick11 months ago

Great story! Looking for more parts. I am intrigued to know more about Chloe's background, i.e. her parents, relatives, acquaintances, etc. It's hard to digest why she agreed to given him a BJ for $300 so easily while she never ever had such a fantasy or compulsion. Well, bygones be bygones, I would build any circumstances more upon what lead to them and how or at least give a compelling background without leaving any holes in the logic.

KoopszKoopsz11 months ago

Great story ,read it for a 2nd time ..

I wonder if she's being coerced more than she thinks like ,maybe eli or someone is her landlord ,breaks in deleted emails from jobs etc etc to make her desperate for cash 🤔

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Hoping for a next chapter. Looking forward to finding out what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Hope that you continue the story

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Try to make it somewhat realistic. Not asking for money upfront or even at all. Not even saying what to pay for the customers. She just expects them to give her whatever they want to at the end? No rubbers being used, no real description of her clothes, what she looks like. All customers are rough and treat her like a slave? She doesn't even bother to say anything. Anybody would have brought a weapon on the second meeting with James and probably clocked him or worse. Maybe read a few more stories. Understand how to structure story, explain characters,

describe situations. Then start fresh with something else.

ledudesomeledudesome7 months ago

Love the story, hope you continue!

Patricia169Patricia1697 months ago

i wisshed i was Chloe :)

CurvyMrsCurvyMrs4 months ago

I’m enjoying and whilst I’ve not been on the streets I can relate with Chloe xx

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