All Comments on 'Nicole and Her Lovers Ch. 01'

Great to see another story start. The potential is huge and anticipated

This has the makings of a great story. Apart from the wife left out, all the rest is well written, erotic, and the undercurrents of domination work well. I hope that aspect doesn’t take over (though it does give you an opportunity to draw the wife in). Your French accent writing is good - never easy to get the balance right without going over the top, but you need to check the French text better. Looking forward to part 2.

Thanks very much! I'm very open to feedback so feel free to give more specific feedback! Thanks again!

Good! I'm really looking forward to the next part. This has all the makings of great series. Be quick!

Hopefully, this excellent story will be continued soon. It has all the elements needed to be a great series: excellent characters, an engaging plot, and a wonderful romantic atmosphere.