All Comments on 'Nicole Gets Blackmailed Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago
Poor ending

Could have been better. Seems like a cop ou to me.

eroticauthor333eroticauthor3333 months agoAuthor

Well, its not quite finished yet haha, but I didn't really like the protagonist so I needed a twist to get rid of him.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Strange way to replace the protagonist. Would have been more interesting/suspenseful to have him get shot and killed by Brad as soon as he and Nicole stepped through the door.

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