All Comments on 'Niece Julie Comes to Visit Pt. 03'

Not nearly as erotic as the first two chapters. Written group sex is too chaotic to build any true passion, particularly when the participants are characters introduced a mere half page earlier. (“Can’t tell the players without a scorecard!”)

Julie morphed from a young woman enamored of her uncle/aunt to a total cumslut. Seems to me the journey from virgin to cumsut should have quite a few more stops along the way.

BTW: A “shutter” is a window covering. A “shudder” is a brief involuntary bodily spasm.